Distinctions

Is

Is Not

Boundary

Systems

Components

ComponentDescription
Hookquestions, stories, or open loops that make people keep reading
Benefitsfocus on the transformation for the reader, not just features
Proofsocial proof, testimonials, where you’ve been featured, results
Storywhy you do this, your journey, to show you’re a real person
Opt-Inemail signup or clear next step at the end

Hook Tactics

TacticExplanation
Yes-Based QuestionsAsk yes-based questions that mirror your audience’s pains:
1. Are you somebody who {blank}?
2. Do you typically feel {blank} when you {blank}?
Goal: Readers think, “Yeah, that’s me.”
Story1. Make the story deeply relatable to the reader’s pains and problems
2. Show you “understand exactly what this person is going through.”
3. - Create a matching intersection between their story and yours
4. Don’t Ramble
Open Loop- Rely on people’s dislike of unfinished things so they feel compelled to keep reading to close the loop.
- Tease a valuable result: e.g., “I’ve discovered an amazing way to do X, Y, and Z.”
- Explicitly delay the payoff: say you’ll explain it later (“Before I give you all the information… make sure you keep reading…”).

Guiding Principles

  1. Make it not actually about you (your trying to resonate with your peeps)
  2. Focus on the audience’s transformation - what you can help them achieve.

Relationships

Perspectives


Works Consulted

  1. How to Write the PERFECT About Me Page 👌